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As a family, we thoroughly enjoyed our stay at the hotel. The facilities were among the best we have experienced, and our overall experience - from the friendly staff to the excellent restaurants and beaches - felt like an oasis.
However, one area for improvement, especially for families with small children, is the lack of evening entertainment for the little ones, which was surprising given how excellent the daytime facilities were.
We will definitely be returning next year!